This story was submitted – not for the contest, but simply for the love of spanking – by a boy who should certainly spend more time writing (and sharing) spanking fiction. The scene is set wonderfully, and the characters are deep and believable. Wow! Enjoy…this one is a real gem.
(The asterisks are my edits – removing some well-written albeit saucy sex talk.)
– Dana
(The asterisks are my edits – removing some well-written albeit saucy sex talk.)
– Dana
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TAMING THE COWBOY
“DARN!” Todd muttered to himself as he sat high in his saddle to get a good look at the valley below him.
He had just finished repairing the stretch of fence separating his ranch from his neighbor and now it was broken again and three of his steers had wandered through to drink from the river.
His neighbors , the Blackwell sisters were young , stunningly beautiful but stubborn and very territorial with the land they had inherited from their Uncle.
Upon arriving they gave Todd strict instructions not to step foot on their land without their permission and he had discovered the hard way that they meant what they said.
Todd still bore the marks on his backside from when the feisty Susan had filled the seat of his pants with peppercorn buckshot and he had no appetite for another dose.
However , for the moment he needed to get the cattle back on his side of the fence so he steered his horse downhill for a closer look.
Todd tried for over an hour to rope ,coax , threaten and scare his steers to return but to no avail.
He sighed with relief when he saw Susan Blackwell gallop up to him.
Susan put a hand to her trusty shotgun perched on her saddle and gave Todd a cursory glance , postponing any greeting until she had examined the grazing steers.
Satisfied that the cattle were Todd’s ,Susan rode over to him with a welcome smile on her pretty face.
Todd smiled back , albeit nervously as he eyed the shotgun.
“Good morning Todd , you can go get your steers now” she told him.
Todd hesitated and looked to Susan for clarification.
Susan giggled.
“Don’t worry I promise not to shoot you this time” she reassured him.
Nonetheless Todd instinctively kept his rear-quarters out of Susan’s range while he fetched the steers and quickly remounted his horse.
Susan smiled mischievously and leaned toward Todd making sure to give him a teasing glimpse of her ample cleavage threatening to burst through the undone buttons of her shirt.
Already feeling uncomfortable Todd tried not to look but failed miserably.
“Actually I was kind of hoping I would find you trespassing on our land again…” Susan told him.
Todd bristled at her comment.
“I’m sure you’re just itching to fill my britches full of buckshot again aren’t you ?” he replied.
Susan laughed mockingly.
“Now you mention it , I did rather enjoy doing that ….and my sister had an even better time plucking the shot out of your cute little tushie…but this time I had something else in mind….” She teased puckering her full lips.
Todd raised an eyebrow quizzically as Susan reached into her saddlebag and produced a large wooden hairbrush.
“…..next time you trespass on our land you’re going across my knee for a good old fashioned spanking !
If you thought that buckshot burned then just wait until I tan your bare backside with this” Susan announced brandishing the hairbrush at him with a glint in her eye.
Taken aback ,Todd blushed and was rendered speechless momentarily.
“You’ve got to be joking me …… the woman who can put me over her lap hasn’t been born yet !” he responded indignantly.
Susan’s smile tainted of arrogance as she dismounted and stood before Todd holding the brush.
“Oh yea?
Your looking at her…are you man enough to find out?” Susan challenged , firmly planting her feet on the ground as she waited for Todd’s reaction.
Todd’s nostrils flared and he glared at Susan as he leapt from his horse.
“That’s it Susan – I’ve had enough of your damn insults and threats for one day.
If anyone is going to get a spanking its you!” he threatened as he took deliberate steps toward her.
Susan felt a charge of excitement pulse through her veins .
She held her ground and steadied her stance as a furious Todd approached.
Thrusting out his right hand to grab Susan’s wrist she anticipated the move , quickly stepping aside forcing Todd to stumble .
As he did , she delivered a sharp kick to his shin and another to the seat of his pants which knocked him to the ground with a thud.
As Todd tried to get back on his feet , Susan leapt onto his broad shoulders pushing his face into the dust as she took hold of his right wrist , roughly twisting it behind his back.
“AAAARGH!” Todd cried out in pain and he grunted again loudly as Susan pulled on his arm and dug a knee sharply into the small of his back.
“AAAAHHH!” he screamed as she grabbed a bunch of his hair with her free hand and hoisted his head up out of the dust.
Todd struggled to shake Susan off his back but found he couldn’t without hurting himself further.
Susan tightened her grip , holding him in place as he struggled until he finally gave up.
“Let me up Susan Dammit!” he spat.
Keeping a firm grip on Todd’s hair and his arm behind his back Susan nimbly stepped back and raised Todd to his feet.
Susan released her grip and spun Todd around .
When a dazed Todd finally steadied himself he was facing a very determined looking woman standing confidently before him with her hands on her hips.
“Over there…march mister……you’re in for a good old fashioned BARE BOTTOM spanking-” she ordered pointing to a nearby tree stump.
For a moment Todd was indignant and thought about refusing and walking away.
He towered over Susan and with his much superior strength she would be hard pressed to stop him.
However , something inside him was compelling him to stay .
He kicked himself for making the fundamental mistakes of underestimating his opponent and attacking with anger but there was no denying the wily young lady had beaten him fair and square .
A despondent Todd dropped his shoulders and trudged over to the tree stump.
“Now get your pants down!” Susan ordered.
Once again Todd’s pride urged him to refuse but he quickly realized that would be cowardly and humiliating.
A real man would stay and take his medicine .
His only hope was to reason with Susan .
“Aw Susan …come on…not on the bare ?
Darn it I’d prefer another dose of buckshot!” he whined.
Susan simply repeated her command .
A satisfied grin spread over her face as Todd sighed and reached for his belt buckle and undid it.
Knowing she had won , Susan relaxed and picked up the hairbrush.
Todd looked at the brush nervously and blushed as he undid his tight jeans .
A beaming Susan made herself comfortable on the tree stump to watch Todd lower his pants and turn around to face her.
***
Susan’s eyes scanned Todd’s body up and down as she tapped the back of the hairbrush against her palm.
Todd gulped and stood silently at attention until Susan patted her lap.
“Over you go” she said curtly.
For a moment Todd stared at Susan’s shapely , denim clad lap and did his best to cover his embarrassment as he draped himself over it.
He put both palms on the ground to steady himself and stared at the dusty ground only inches from his nose.
The fact that his rear end was elevated high above his head made him feel very vulnerable.
***
Her eyes opened wide with anticipation as she raised Chad’s shirt tail to reveal a taut , muscular backside.
She felt like she was in heaven as her palms explored Todd’s manly rear-quarters.
***
Susan snapped herself out of her trance and took a firm grip of the hairbrush.
It was time to take care of business and she knew she would have to be use the brush efficiently to make any impression on Todd’s Cowboy hide , toughened up with long days on the saddle.
Todd gulped as he felt the back of the brush lightly tapping his buttocks as Susan took aim and prepared to start his spanking.
She decided to start with power to get his attention , so gritting her teeth she raised the brush high above her head and brought it down on Todd’s right buttock with all the force she could muster.
Todd yelped and bucked as the ferocious swat landed .
Susan followed up with four more powerful swats to the same tender spot.
She then picked a spot on Todd’s left buttock and proceeded to give it the same treatment.
It was an effective technique and certainly tenderized Todd’s tough hide and got his attention.
He felt like Susan had burned two holes in his skin and the burning was gradually spreading over his backside as she took a brief pause.
For the next phase Susan picked up the pace , delivering sharp rapid-fire volleys making sure she covered every inch of Todd’s cheeks and upper thighs.
Todd was squirming , bucking and howling on her lap now as his behind was well and truly blistered from the non-stop barrage of spanks.
His legs kicked wildly as Susan spanked harder and faster , revisiting the tenderized spots again and again.
Todd’s cheeks were a fiery red now with oval shaped outlines of every red hue peppered all over them.
Susan paused again and locked a leg around Todd to hold him in place.
“I’ll turn up the heat a bit more and this man is done !” she chortled to herself proudly.
“WAAAAAAH!” Todd emptied his lungs with a loud bawl as the brush cracked against his tender skin in a final crescendo of hard ,stinging swats.
At the end Todd exhaled loudly and a satisfied Susan released her grip indicating the spanking was over.
Todd athletically leapt to his feet and immediately began trying to sooth his flaming rear by rubbing it furiously while he danced around like a whirling dervish.
Susan found it all quite amusing and particularly enjoyed Todd’s erection dance along and peek in and out of his shirt .
Clearly in some distress Todd’s eye spotted the inviting coolness of the river .
His pants still at his ankles he hobbled toward it and launched himself into it – backside first.
The river came up to Todd’s waist and his face filled with relief as the cold water soothed the burning in his rear.
By now Susan was doubled over with laughter watching Todd’s embarrassing predicament.
Her laughter became infectious and Todd was soon laughing along with her.
He began splashing her with water.
“The water’s fine Susan – why don’t you join me ?” he chortled.
Susan needed no encouragement as she ripped off her shirt and jeans and leapt into the river to join Todd.
She immediately ripped off his shirt , throwing her nakedness into his arms and locking her lips onto his.
They embraced in a long , passionate kiss as Chad fumbled and kicked his jeans off.
***
They both lay there exhausted and Susan slid her fingers slowly down Todd’s back to rest on the smoldering , hot skin of his well spanked backside.
“OOUCH…careful Susan !” Todd yelped.
Susan smiled.
“Boy is your skin hot there…let me have a look” she asked excitedly.
Todd raised an eyebrow and rolled onto his tummy to let Susan examine her handiwork.
“It’s going to be a while before you can sit on that comfortably !” she declared proudly.
At that moment they were both startled by the sound of horse hooves and rising dust in the distance signaling the untimely arrival of Susan’s sister Julie on the scene.
The pair scrambled to their feet and were able to get dressed just in time.
Julie looked at the pair suspiciously “What have you two been up to?” she asked.
Susan giggled and opened her mouth to speak but Todd put his palm in front of it .”Don’t you dare Susan …” he whispered trying to look innocently at Julie.
“Susan was just helping me round up some strays Julie….thanks Susan….best be going now…”he stammered and winced as he hobbled to his horse.
The course , wet denim scratched against his tender bottom making it very uncomfortable to walk.
“Are you hurt Todd …you’re limping ?” Julie asked sympathetically.
Todd shook his head and then yelped as , without thinking , he sat his tender rear firmly on the hard saddle and immediately sprung up.
Julie glanced over at the hairbrush still sitting on the tree stump and looked at her sister with disbelief.
“You didn’t?” she asked.
Susan nodded having subdued her amusement to a girlish giggle “Sure did !”
Julie shook her head “You sure are something Sis’ !” she declared .
*****
(I understand that there is a sequel to this story…where the Cowboy gets his revenge. I am highly anticipating it’s arrival. – Dana)
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Nice, oh cowboy and cowgirl bottoms are the best! I had a young cowgirl for a lover for awhile and I loved spanking that tight strong bottom she had from riding, a horse, riding a horse hehe.