This month’s story writing contest, ‘Who Do You Think You Are’, garnered a very few entries – even fewer of which were eligible, based on unfavorable content or inability to stay on the requested topic.
In this month’s contest, and in all future contests, I will choose NOT to edit or post ineligible entries. If you’re going to take the time to write and submit a story, please do yourself the favor of making it:
1. On Topic
2. Free of Sexual Scenarios…jeez.
3. On Topic.
4. Free of Characters or references to characters under the age of 18.
Otherwise, all your time and effort will be wasted.
Now, let’s celebrate May’s story contest winner (who’ll receive a free membership to danakanespanks.com)!
Grandmother’s Family Secret
My name is Yolanda and my parents died in an automobile accident when I was very young. I was raised by my Aunt Consuela and brought up in the Catholic Church. Aunt Connie was named after her great grandmother, my great great grandmother, who lived on a ranch in western Texas. When Connie died I was the only surviving relative of Connie’s great grandmother Consuela. My husband and I began receiving monthly letters and checks for our mineral rights from an oil company involved in hydraulic drilling.
My husband and I decided to go to western Texas and visit the ranch. When we arrived the barn was ready to collapse; but, the house was in decent shape. I doubted if any of the furniture had any antique value but I’m not an appraiser. In the attic we found an old chest that contained a family Bible, Consuela’s diary, a pearl handled revolver, a large oval ivory hairbrush with a worn smooth back, a long thin horsewhip doubled over to fit in the chest, and numerous pictures and family heirlooms.
Consuela’s wedding picture depicted her as a tall stunningly beautiful Latina woman with dark hair and eyes. Her husband had a slight build and was much smaller than Consuela and appeared to be much younger. When we checked in the family Bible she was 28 and he was 21; but, his slender build and boyish face made him look much younger.
As we drove home my husband and I were shocked by what we read in Consuela’s diary. She had married Ollie Roberts in 1881. Ollie was orphaned when he was 14 and taken in by neighbors who ran a hotel. He was no more a problem in school than the other boys but his slender physique made him the constant target of bullies. According to his many confessions to Consuela he was arrested when he was 14 for stealing cheese and found to be in possession of stolen firearms and clothes. He escaped by climbing up the chimney and supported himself by horse thievery.
Frank Cahill a local blacksmith constantly bullied Ollie. One day he threw Ollie to the ground and started kicking him. Ollie was only 15 when he pulled a pistol and shot Cahill who died the next day. Ollie was later involved in the Lincoln County wars as a hired hand. Legend has him killing 21 men but he confessed to Consuela that he had killed 7 and they all deserved to die. By now he was known as the kid because of his slight build, beardless face, and youthful appearance.
Civil War General Lew Wallace, author of “Ben-Hur”, was elected territorial governor of New Mexico and wanted to bring order. He offered amnesty to anyone involved in the Lincoln County wars who wasn’t yet indited; but, the kid was on trial in Mesilla and found guilty of the murder Sheriff Brady and sentenced to hang. The kid escaped and fled to Ft. Sumner. His friend former bartender and buffalo hunter Pat Garrett was elected sheriff and staged the kids killing which allowed Billy the Kid to escape to western Texas and start a new life.
Billy changed his name to Ollie Roberts, married Consuela in 1881, and converted to Catholicism. Every Sunday they rode into town to attend the Catholic Church. Billy confessed all of his sins to the parish priest who told him that he must be sorry and do penance if his sins were to be forgiven. After confession when they returned home Billy sit in front of Consuela and shared his confession with her. He confessed all of his sins from stealing cheese, clothes, firearms, horses, to killing 7 men. Billy was not a killer who killed wantonly, they got what they deserved.
Billy shared with Consuela his need for penance if his sins were to be forgiven. Consuela insisted that his penance needed to be an act of painful self -abasement preformed to show sorrow and repentance for his many sins. She ordered Billy to the barn where she told Billy that he was to receive a severe horsewhipping. He was ordered to strip naked and his hands were tied above his head and secured to a beam. Consuela crisscrossed his back, buttocks, and upper legs with her whip as he howled and squirmed in pain. She untied his hands and helped Billy to the bedroom where he laid on his stomach and she rubbed ointment on his welts.
In her diary she wrote how every Sunday after church she would give Billy a weekly maintaince spanking. They would go to the bedroom where Billy would strip and she would remove her Sunday dress. Consuela would sit on her straight backed vanity chair clad in her 19th century lingerie with the large oval ivory hairbrush in her hand. Billy would kneel in front of his disciplinarian and ask for a spanking as part of his penance. He would then go over her knee for a severe no nonsense spanking. He would kick and squirm but make no attempt struggle off of her lap. Consuela was an excellent disciplinarian. Her weekly spankings would continue until he was begging forgiveness for his many sins, crying real tears, and his bottom turned crimson. She wrote that he could kick, cry, and squirm but he knew that if he ever fell off of her lap he was going to the barn for a severe whipping. According to her diary that never happened again.
Consuela suspected that Billy found a release from guilt which brought about a strange need for her weekly spankings. Being draped over Consuela’s lovely lingerie clad lap was much more pleasurable than being tied to a beam in the barn! After reading her diary I understood why the back of her hairbrush was worn smooth!
Can you imaging the infamous Billy the Kid standing before his spanking disciplinarian, confessing his many sins, and being draped over his beautiful Latina wife’s knee doing penance for the sins of his youth?
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No, I can’t! Really imaginative story, turning the “ruthless outlaw killer” idea on its head like this.
BTW, if that “pearl-handled revolver” belonged to Billy the Kid, it would be worth a considerable amount of money…
Some people believe President Kennedy survived on an island after being shot, some believe Jesse James’ killing by Bob Ford was staged, the 9-11 , destruction of the twin towers was an inside job, and I could go on about distortions of history. This story was meant to be entertaining! I am the author and my purpose was to entertain not teach history.
The Author
SUPER creative story! :)
I have to admit the Sarah Palin story I sent you was a fluke effort. Creative writing isn’t truly my forte-I COULD chalk it up to laziness. :)
But for the rest of the people who either disregarded, defied or “forgot” the rules of adult themed content, maybe some did it to test you for an email type scolding? Spanking?
Alexis, Thank you for your comment.
P.S. I enjoyed the Sarah Palin story.
The Author
To The Author.
Thanks for your appreciation. That story came about a few years ago because I was corresponding with a female top in another state who simply referred to herself as “Mistress.” I’m not REMOTELY submissive but played along with her “command” that I write a story for her expressing a spanking fantasy.
Thank you Yolanda for a very entertaining and creative story. Growing up I had quite a bit of empathy for Billy.
Although I am a switch, I do have a definite preference for submitting to a female disciplinarian; so I can well relate
to that weekly maintenance concept. Kinda think I would be well served with such a regimen :-) I expect Ms. Kane
would be in complete agreement !!!!
Congratulations on winning the Contest, and enjoy your prize. Oh, BTW … in case you are not aware, those old ivory
hairbrushes are damn near lethal weapons !!!!!!
All the best dear lady,
Paul