Readers,
This entry to the Brief Encounter story contest is funny and well-written. I think you’ll enjoy ‘A Priceless Spanking.’ (The asterisks are my edits, for slightly naughty langugage – although it should be said that it’s still obvious.)
– Dana
A Priceless Spanking
Sara had not been the best girlfriend in the world. She ran up $1575.50 on Andrew’s credit card. Designer snake print jeans $489, Lace-Inset Blouse $897.00, designer heels $178, red panties 11.50. The spanking she was going to receive, priceless.
Sara was lying naked on her stomach with her laptop in front of her. Her long dark hair was cascading down her back all the way to her lovely bottom that protruded proudly in the air. Her large breasts rested comfortably on her bed. Sara opened her e-mail account. Apparently, she had inherited a large sum of money from a long lost Nigerian relative and only had to send $500 to cover the processing fees. Sara laughed. “How could anyone be stupid enough to fall for this?” she thought. “O here’s one from Andrew.” Sara read Andrew’s e-mail:
“Meet me at 135 Baker St. Coventry, CT at 3pm” was all it said.
“Hmm that’s odd” Sara thought. “He must have a surprise planed for me, how fun.” Sara looked at the location on Google Earth. “Looks like a train station, not very romantic. Well I better get dressed.” Sara got up and put on her new red panties. “I better not wear the rest of my new clothes, Andrew might ask questions.” Sara put on her socks, some old jeans, a tee shirt and some running shoes. There was no reason to get dressed up for a train station.
When Sara arrived at the train station she was surprised that it was empty. Just then Sara saw Andrew walking towered her.
Andrew: “The station is shut down for repairs. We have it all to ourselves.”
Sara: “I don’t have sex in train stations if that’s what you had in mind.”
Andrew: “Don’t worry, so apparently you ran up an enormous bill on my credit card.”
Sara: “(smiling) So, what are you going to do about it?”
“Perhaps I’ll do Andrew in the train station after all. After a good lay he will probably forget all about the credit card,” Sara thought to herself.
Andrew: “Well for starters I’m going to give you a good spanking.”
Sara: “(laughs) What a joke. You don’t have the *** to spank me.”
Andrew: “We’ll just see about that. Take off all your clothes save you shoes and socks. You’re going to need them.”
Sara “OK, I’m feeling pretty *** myself.”
Sara casually took off her shirt then her jeans and panties.
Andrew: “Well I’m not. (sitting down on a bench) Get over my knee.”
Sara positioned herself on Andrew’s lap.
smack
Sara: “I thought I felt something. Did a fly land on my ass?”
Smack!
Sara: “O now you want to play paddy cake with my ass. How cute, paddy cake, paddy cake bakers m”
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Sara: “Owwy, owwy, owwy”
Andrew: “I thought I didn’t have the *** to spank you.”
Sara: “Ok! Ok! You have the ***! You have the ***!”
SMACK!!!! SMACK!!!! SMACK!!!! SMACK!!!! SMACK!!!! SMACK!!!! SMACK!!!! SMACK!!!! SMACK!!!!
Sara: “Your *** are gigantic! You have the biggest *** in the world! Please stop spanking me!”
Andrew: “No need to get carried away. My *** are average size.”
Sara: “Have you been comparing them with the guys at the gym?”
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Sara: “Sorry! Sorry! Sorry!”
Andrew: “Now stand up and get your little red caboose on the tracks.”
Sara: “O aren’t you just sooo clever (sarcastically)”
Andrew: “You just can’t help being a smart ass, can you?”
SMACK!!!! SMACK!!!! SMACK!!!! SMACK!!!! SMACK!!!! SMACK!!!! SMACK!!!! SMACK!!!! SMACK!!!!
Sara: “Sorry! Sorry! Sorry!”
Sara got up and stood on the train tracks facing away from Andrew.
Andrew: “You’re always saying that you want to exercise more. Why don’t you pretend you’re a train and run to the platform and back?” SMACK!!!!
Sara jogged slowly down the track. As Andrew watched Sara’s red bottom change shape as she jogged, Andrew realized that he had lied about not being ***. Sara’s red bottom looked smaller and smaller to Andrew as she jogged towered the platform. When she reached the platform she turned around and began jogging toward Andrew. Her breasts bounced rhythmically. Sara’s breasts seemed so carefree to Andrew, free to bounce as they pleased without the confinement of modern technology. Sara now stood in front of Andrew. She was breathing a little harder then normally.
Andrew: “Turn around; you’ve been a very bad train. You were way to slow. The passengers were all late and I’ve had to listen to them complain all day.”
SMACK!!!! SMACK!!!! SMACK!!!! SMACK!!!! SMACK!!!!
Andrew was pleased that Sara was no longer talking back to him.
Andrew: “Now let’s try this again.” SMACK!!!!
Sara ran at a full sprint down the track. She reached the platform in no time. She turned around and began running toward Andrew. Her breasts were now bouncing at a feverish pace. Sara stood in front of Andrew.
Sara: “(breathing heavily) Was I a good train this time Mr. Conductor?”
Andrew: “Yes you were.”
Sara: “I’m sorry about the credit card. I’ll return the clothes I bought.”
Andrew: “Don’t return the red panties. I kind of like them.”
Sara: “O good you’ll look so cute in them.”
Andrew: “Well I see you’re still a smart ass. But my arm is too tired to spank you anymore.”
Sara kissed Andrew. Andrew gently kneaded Sara’s sore red bottom.
Sara: “My bottom is so red (protruding her lower lip in an exaggerated pout). Kiss it better.”
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Good story, very well written – really conveys the dynamic between Andrew & Sara. Nice touch of eroticism to go with the spanking. Thanks for sharing.
UKL
Thanks, I had a lot of fun trying to think up some clever dialogue. I’m a big fan of your writing.
CapD
ih dana kane i need a spanking from you